I have to say you introduced George quite nicely. You gave him and Chloe a small background, which was just enough of a threat to Oliver.
And I loved the guys rolling in and defending the bro-code to get Oliver back on his feet and after Chloe! I really, really love how supportive Clark is in this. You get like forty-bonus points for that! ;)
I felt George had the punch from Oliver coming, but I was so sad for Ollie, and so frustrated at Chloe for not at least reading into why Oliver had tracked them down and hit George in the first place. That should have clued her in, and she should have been a little more relieved. For Ollie's sake, I hope she makes it up to him when she catches on ;)
After Lois locks them up of course! Can't wait for more =)
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Date: 2011-04-01 11:29 pm (UTC)And I loved the guys rolling in and defending the bro-code to get Oliver back on his feet and after Chloe! I really, really love how supportive Clark is in this. You get like forty-bonus points for that! ;)
I felt George had the punch from Oliver coming, but I was so sad for Ollie, and so frustrated at Chloe for not at least reading into why Oliver had tracked them down and hit George in the first place. That should have clued her in, and she should have been a little more relieved. For Ollie's sake, I hope she makes it up to him when she catches on ;)
After Lois locks them up of course! Can't wait for more =)