:(((( The end of the chapter nearly made me cry. But it was a perfect scene. How can you find the words after so long.
I was a little apprehensive to hit and read since I've started my own Lazarus follow on but you've got such a different tone and story behind her return that I'm not so anxious that it's going to impact my writing. Also I'm nearly past her meeting up with Oliver again, so I'm pretty sure it's going to play out very differently. :D
I love your Chlo-Lo in this. I love when they show that on SV. They're like best friends and sisters more than cousins.
"I'm glad you know the truth about everything now, Lo," she lowered her gaze to the table, "I always felt guilty keeping you in the dark like I did, it just wasn't…"
"I know," Lois interrupted, "it wasn't your secret to tell."
I especially loved that. You know it had to be hard for Chloe, especially when Clark started dating Lois, and she noticed how much Lois loved him, and all the trouble with doing things for the Blur and the ZodBlur the danger and such. :) So I loved that you put it out there and addressed it.
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Date: 2010-10-08 12:21 am (UTC)I was a little apprehensive to hit and read since I've started my own Lazarus follow on but you've got such a different tone and story behind her return that I'm not so anxious that it's going to impact my writing. Also I'm nearly past her meeting up with Oliver again, so I'm pretty sure it's going to play out very differently. :D
I love your Chlo-Lo in this. I love when they show that on SV. They're like best friends and sisters more than cousins.
"I'm glad you know the truth about everything now, Lo," she lowered her gaze to the table, "I always felt guilty keeping you in the dark like I did, it just wasn't…"
"I know," Lois interrupted, "it wasn't your secret to tell."
I especially loved that. You know it had to be hard for Chloe, especially when Clark started dating Lois, and she noticed how much Lois loved him, and all the trouble with doing things for the Blur and the ZodBlur the danger and such. :) So I loved that you put it out there and addressed it.